TPO-20 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, it had been common practice since the late 1960s no to suppress natural forest fires. The “let it burn” policy assumed that forest fire would burn themselves out quickly, without causing much dama

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TPO-20 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, it had been common practice since the late 1960s no to suppress natural forest fires. The “let it burn” policy assumed that forest fire would burn themselves out quickly, without causing much dama

Both the reading and the lecture discuss whether the "let it burn" policy causes much damage or not. The reading implies that "let it burn" policy is harmful in plants, animals and tourism receipts. However, the professor strongly disagrees with the reading passages.

First of all, the reading passage mentions that the forest fire can damage all the plants. yet, the lecturer severely challenges the theory by arguing that the plants can be created after fire. Because of the large plants is burned by fire, the small plants unshield, and furthermore, the various plants can thrive.

Secondly, the passage indicates that wildlife is affected. Nevertheless, the speaker opposes the evidence revealed in the reading passage. To elaborate, due to plenty of plants creating, the rabbits can have food to eat.

Finally, the passage suggests that there are no tourists coming after fire, and then there are negetive influences to the local economy. yet, the lecturer states that it shows no impact on tourist. The tourist comes years after years.

In conclusion, the professor argues against each theory in the reading. that is to say, she thinks the "let it burn" policy as a good policy.

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
... forest fire can damage all the plants. yet, the lecturer severely challenges the t...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
...getive influences to the local economy. yet, the lecturer states that it shows no i...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ues against each theory in the reading. that is to say, she thinks the 'let it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 195.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51656445317 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2453105627 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9285714286 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06452816374 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197276591775 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621723015352 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493264347975 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951283562584 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512263073725 0.0443174109184 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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