Genetic modification one kinds of process which is improves the tree condition. According to the reading, genetic modified tree gives huge advantages. Whereas, acoording to the lecture, the professor chellenges to each outlines of the passage.
Firstly, the author claims that genetic modified trees survive more than unmodified trees, it is more hardier than other trees. In hawaii, papaya trees damage by the ring spot virus infection. Genetic modified papaya which resist the specific virus and protect them. In contrast, the lecturer mentions that resistance condition of the trees are not gurrentee that survive. Non modified trees are very diverse and in harsh climate or infection condition it could not survive. Genetic modified trees are made more uniformly therefore, in new climate or pest trees not survives and die.
Secondly, the article implies that genetic modified trees increase the product yield. So, farmer have benefits to investment, save pesticide and make more money. On the contrary, the speaker explains that company owner take more money for genetic modified seed than nonmodified seeds and every year farmer must to pay to the company for plants growth.
Lastly, the passage emphasizes that prevent the unnecessary trees and help to growth of the firewood and building timber. Also, genetic modified trees increase the fast growth and high yield. However, the professor points out that genetic modied damage the all wide trees. Genetic modified trees grow fast than other trees so other nonmodified trees compete to for the water, sunlight and nutrition. Overall, negative consequence for native species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one kind', 'a kind', or simply 'kinds'?
Suggestion: one kind; a kind; kinds
Genetic modification one kinds of process which is improves the tree ...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds of process which is improves the tree condition. According to the reading, gen...
^^
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'hardier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hardier
...rvive more than unmodified trees, it is more hardier than other trees. In hawaii, papaya tr...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is more hardier than other trees. In hawaii, papaya trees damage by the ring ...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...nonmodified seeds and every year farmer must to pay to the company for plants growth. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44881889764 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44929989959 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1412324519 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.564824137493 0.272083759551 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196887900504 0.0996497079465 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110117232766 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353245417708 0.162205337803 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090435976303 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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