The article states that population of the yellow cedar, a species of tree that is common in northwestern North America, have been declined since about 1880 and provides three reasons to explain it. The professor thinks that those reasons are not convincing and opposes each reason.
First, the reading claims that the yellow cedar declines due to insect parasites, the cedar bark beetle. The professor refutes this point and explains that cedar trees are very famous for its powerful resistance. When cedar bark attacks the trees, it will be poisoned by the toxic chemical from the trees. Therefore, the insects will be dead instead of the trees.
Second, the article says that brown bears eating the tree bark are another reason for the decline. The professor also refutes this statement by proving that the place yellow cedar grows is in northwestern North America where there are no brown bears living. Obviously, no bears would harm the cedar.
Third, the reading states that climate change is the final reason. However, the professor opposes this point as well. He explains that only fine cedars tree usually start growing in the later winter which means the weak and sensitive trees are already dead in warm weather. Therefore, all of the left are surely have the strong ability to survive the cold weather and not easy to be killed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 286, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...lready dead in warm weather. Therefore, all of the left are surely have the strong ability...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 313, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
.... Therefore, all of the left are surely have the strong ability to survive the cold ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, therefore, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01333333333 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20730996554 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2177238287 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7692307692 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415981018623 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137651784702 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795089652939 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244758064166 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344148407792 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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