The reading is discussing the discovery of T. Rex actual tissues found in a 70-million-year-old fossil leg of the dinosaur which was consciously broke open. The significance of this achievement highlites because of the difficulty to examine animal tissues found in fossils. However, professor so not believe with the phenomenon, providing explanations to his theory.
Firstly, the passage states that in the break of fossil bone was found branching channels looking soft material, which probably might be blood vessels. But according to professor’s opinion, these “vessels” more likely is just residue of bacteria colonies appeared naturally in residue.
Secondly, the article says that microscopic researches of the bone structure found out the presence of spheres, which remind blood cells. As research result says, these objects had dark red centers and it contains iron-a material, which role is to carry oxygen to tissues. Though, the professor’s point of view claims that the red traces of iron possibly are pieces of reddish mineral.
Thirdly, from the reading we learn that the co-collagen was detected in the bone of the dinosaur. On the other hand, from the professor’s speech we found out that collagen just can not exist more than 100000 years, so the protein which was found in the bone of 70-million-year-old fossil might just came from another source.
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently 90
- TPO-21 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 83
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45622119816 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23867741657 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0125827238 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298935144025 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107642990436 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748251221501 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171065799717 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241436568698 0.0443174109184 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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