TPO 26 Q 1
The passage states the dominance situations of the zebra mussel as a freshwater shellfish native to eastern europe. it explains that spreading the zebra mussels of its habitat to new places, north america coastline, is invasive and would not be stopped.
The invasiveness of these shellfishes makes seriouse problems for freshwater fishe population in the the north of america.
The lecturer casts doubt on the reading reasons for this statements.
First, the reading posits that zebra mussels attachment to the ships' bottom would help them to carry out and spread all over the water during ship travelling from europe to north america; however, the professor explaines that these species would not survived in salty water of oceans and it would be controls their population spreadness by ships' travelling.
Moreover, the passage illustrates the ability of zebra mussels in the new habitats to become dominant species not only for their high reproduction rate but also absence of their predators in their new habitats; controversly, the lecturer posits swich food of the birds' in new habitat of the zebra mussels which makes the birds new predators of the mussels and controls their population.
On the other hand, the text explains the negative impacts on the fish population which are depended on the planktons as the sharing foods with the mussels. Not only would decrease the zebra mussels the fishs' foods (planktons), but also have negative impacts on fishes populations in freshwater; whereas, the professor argues that the zebra mussels, in new habitats, have positive impacts on fish of the sea bottom population which are not rely on plankton as a food and the presence of mussels would rise their populations.
- TPO 26 Q 1 76
- Tpo 25 Q1 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- TPO 50 Q1 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ter shellfish native to eastern europe. it explains that spreading the zebra musse...
^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...lems for freshwater fishe population in the the north of america. The lecturer casts ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...lems for freshwater fishe population in the the north of america. The lecturer casts ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... casts doubt on the reading reasons for this statements. First, the reading posits...
^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'survive'
Suggestion: survive
... explaines that these species would not survived in salty water of oceans and it would b...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 438, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...the sea bottom population which are not rely on plankton as a food and the presence ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f mussels would rise their populations.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22661870504 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66317535586 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492805755396 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 21.2450331126 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.399187092 49.2860985944 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.625 110.228320801 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 21.698381199 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532507742207 0.272083759551 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226947011355 0.0996497079465 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118968629851 0.0662205650399 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25572745382 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133933647078 0.0443174109184 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.3589403974 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.0289183223 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.498013245 149% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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