Both the professor and the author are trying to indicate the possible reasons behind the period known as the Little Ice Age. The professor believes that the reasons presented by the text is out dated since the scientist now assures that none of the previous reasons could really cause the Little Ice Age.
First, the text states that due to a period of time known to be of a warmer weather where glaciers melted and flood the oceans with freshwater caused disruption to the Gulf Stream. However, the professor stated that this cooling effect could only happen in Europe and America but not in the southern part of the globe, and since the Little Ice Age covered the southern parts as well this cause could not explain the reasons for the Little Ice Age.
Second, the text says that volcanoes eruption create a very dark clouds contain dust and sulfur gas into the atmosphere leading to blocking out sunlight from reaching the earth and the temperature to decrease significantly could be a possible reasons for the Little Ice Age. However, the professor contends that in case that the former senior was to happen a significant change could have happened as well. He added that a noticeable change in sunset coloring as well as blue turning into blue color because of the sulfur effect could happen, and since nothing was mention by the people who lived at that time that could only indicate that the volcano eruption was not strong enough to be a reason for the Little Ice Age.
Finally, the text suggests that because of a substantial decrease in human population as well as a decrease in carbon dioxide that been absorbed by increasing number of forest's trees all works together to decrease the greenhouse effect that keeps earth warm. On the other hand, the professor affirms that the decrease in human population did not last for a long time, and eventually humans need to cut down the trees to feed the outgrowing populations. He added that because of the short period of this claimed to be the cause for the Little Ica Age it could not consider to be the real cause after the Little Ica Age formation.
The reading and lecture both
The reading and lecture both discuss the possible explanation of little ice age formation. While the reading provides three ideas to explain the little ice age formation, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading avers that the disruption od ocean currents caused the ice age foration. This is because it provides a lot of fresh water into Gulf Stream. So, the climate became more cooler. However, the professor questions this notion by saying that the disruption of Gulf Stream had cooling effect only at Europe and North American. However, at other places like Nizoland this disruption of Gulf Stream could not explain why these areas became cooler.
In addition, the volcanic eruption could provide the air with high amount of dust that blocked the sunlight. As a result. the climate temperature decreaed. On the other hand, the professor contradicts this point by explaining that the volcanic disruption added enough dust to cause cooloing in temperature. Also, it should produce visible effect. For example, in the past, people could see colorful sunrise or colorful snow like blue or brown. However, there was not any report that confirm that happened. So, this volcanic was not strong enough to produce dust.
Lastly, the article mentions that the decrease of human population was the casue behind this ice age formation because the forest trees left it behind without any vegetation. Consequently, this decreased the green house effect. Nevertheless, the professor questions this idea by pointing out that the human population increased again and the forest was not empety for a long time. So, they started to work on cutting the forest again to feed the population. As a result, the forest could not have enough time to cause coolong effect.
caused disruption to the Gulf Stream.
caused the disruption to the Gulf Stream.
volcanoes eruption create a very dark clouds contain dust and sulfur gas into the atmosphere
volcano eruptions create very dark clouds containing dust and sulfur gas into the atmosphere
volcanoes eruption create a very dark clouds contain dust and sulfur gas into the atmosphere leading to blocking out sunlight from reaching the earth and the temperature to decrease significantly could be a possible reasons
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because of the sulfur effect could happen,
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since nothing was mention by the people
since nothing was mentioned by the people
in carbon dioxide that been absorbed by
in carbon dioxide that has been absorbed by
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