TPO 28
The article claims that Robert E. peary a well known explorer reached the north pole at 1909 and provides three reason to support that. However, the lecturer does not believe in these evidences. she refutes the article claim and opposes each reasons are stated in the article.
First, the article posits that National Geographic Society instruct a committe to invistigate peary's claim. they surveyed peary's record and equipments and finally aproved his success. On the other hand, the professor argues this by saying that these invistigations are not convincing. she accepts N.G.S declare did a research but she cast a doubt in this approvment. she said that investigator were his close friends and they sponsored him and they did not examined the evidences carefully. she believes they did research with a bias, then their results will not worth at all.
Second, the article supports peary's achivement by bringing another reason that recently another expediation repeated peary's expediation exactlly in 37 days which he did, from the same start point and the same destination. In contrast, the lecturer contends this reason by comparing the condition of eavery's journy to north pole. she states that in the recently journy the expeditor used new approach such as providing food with airplane during the way which it was not provided for peary. she states that this comparison is unfavourable and they are not in the same situation, hence the results should not be considered comparable.
Third, the article avers that photo of peary at the pole prove his achivement. it says that the researcher mesuered the shadow in this picture and they prove the sun position at that time and it is a strong evidance for his claim. The professor argues about these technic and picture and refutes this by explaining that shadow based measurement can not be percies to determine the sun position. she adds that these photos were captured by primitive camera which do not have good quality. they are phasy and faded. these pictures can't be used to proved his big claim.
- tpo 26 Integrated task 70
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- Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success at college or university 1 Tutors in university 2 The encouragement from family and friends 3 High quality education from high school 73
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- Tpo 23 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...er does not believe in these evidences. she refutes the article claim and opposes e...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch reasons are stated in the article. First, the article posits that National ...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... First, the article posits that National Geographic Society instruct a committe t...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...a committe to invistigate pearys claim. they surveyed pearys record and equipments a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...hese invistigations are not convincing. she accepts N.G.S declare did a research bu...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ons are not convincing. she accepts N.G.S declare did a research but she cast a d...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ut she cast a doubt in this approvment. she said that investigator were his close f...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'examine'
Suggestion: examine
...and they sponsored him and they did not examined the evidences carefully. she believes t...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...d not examined the evidences carefully. she believes they did research with a bias,...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their results will not worth at all. Second, the article supports pearys achi...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...dition of eaverys journy to north pole. she states that in the recently journy the ...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new approach such as providing food with airplane during the way which it was not...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ay which it was not provided for peary. she states that this comparison is unfavour...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d not be considered comparable. Third, the article avers that photo of p...
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Line 11, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...peary at the pole prove his achivement. it says that the researcher mesuered the s...
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Line 11, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technic' or 'these technics'?
Suggestion: this technic; these technics
...r his claim. The professor argues about these technic and picture and refutes this by explain...
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Line 11, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... percies to determine the sun position. she adds that these photos were captured by...
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Line 11, column 492, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... camera which do not have good quality. they are phasy and faded. these pictures can...
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Line 11, column 518, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...good quality. they are phasy and faded. these pictures cant be used to proved his big...
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Line 11, column 533, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hey are phasy and faded. these pictures cant be used to proved his big claim.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, second, so, then, third, well, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53587532244 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6078051403 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.35 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312047804009 0.272083759551 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906089651671 0.0996497079465 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958692559635 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195140579361 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565300891527 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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