The reading and lecture both discuss the hypothesis of edimontosaurus migration to the north slope in winter. While the reading states three reasons to support that migration, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading avers that edmontosaurus migrate to noth in winter looking for food supply. This is because no plants due to the cold weather in winter. On the other hand, the professor argues this notion by saying that edomontosaurus do not have to travel to find food. In fact, at summer the weather is so warm and there are many palnts can grow easily because the sunshine stays for tweenty four hours. So, the warm temprature provides good condition for plants to grow. Although these plants die at winter, the endmontosaurs can survive on these died plants. As a result, there is no need for these animals to move in winter.
In addition, the reading shows that endmontosaurs live in herds that help them to manage the migration. However, the professor refutes this idea by explaning that herd does not mean migration. Some animals used herds for other reasons. For example, some animals use herds for protection from other preditors. For instance, rosevillac lives in west United States in herds but they did not migrate.
Lastly, the article mentions that edmontosaur can migrate for long distance and they can run so fast. Nevertheless, the professor questions this idea by pointing out that the young endomontosaurs are not capable to migrate for long distance and they move so slow. Furthermore, the adult endmontosaurs cannot leave the young jonville to live alone. Consequently, the endmonsaurs do not migrate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13503649635 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75039411781 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5755994864 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72222222222 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258090121261 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782473634804 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410382702757 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142193744991 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200100063534 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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