The reading and the speaker argues about the Edmontosaurs migration in very contrast ways.
Firstly, reading passage says that it might be migrated to warmer area in order to get the food because during the winter session plants availability are very less due severe cold, that reason it might be migrated to the warmer area. But the speaker contrasts this point by saying that 100 millions years before Alaska warmer then today, so during the summer time there may be plenty of plants there, and even that plant which died during the winter session that can be used to eat on warmer time. So there is need of migrating one place to other place.
Secondly, reading passage states that fossils records shows that they lives along with the Caribou and buffalo, it shows that they had migrated from Artic region and further the skeleton of Edmontosaurus was found in this place. Again, the lecture refutes this point by stating that it might be there because of need of extra production from the predator, she gives one example for that the yolk used to live with herds. It does not mean they have migrated, it is all about protection from enemies.
Thirdly, reading passage explains that it has very good musculature to travel long distance because it used to walk at the speed of 40 kilometres per hour, so it possible that they can travel more than six week and can continue up to 1600 KM. Still, speaker opposes this point by stating that, when the small herd animals are not possible to crass such great distance how the big giant animal can walk this much distance.
To sum up, reading says that this animal might have migrated because for the forage, it they found the skeleton of it and it had the capability of crossing more thousands of kilometres but speaker contrast these all points by some evidences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y, reading passage says that it might be migrated to warmer area in order to get ...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...100 millions years before Alaska warmer then today, so during the summer time there ...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...Alaska warmer then today, so during the summer time there may be plenty of plants there, a...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...day, so during the summer time there may be plenty of plants there, and even that...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...es that fossils records shows that they lives along with the Caribou and buffalo, it ...
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...nd further the skeleton of Edmontosaurus was found in this place. Again, the lect...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ible that they can travel more than six week and can continue up to 1600 KM. Still,...
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...ore than six week and can continue up to 1600 KM. Still, speaker opposes this poi...
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... it they found the skeleton of it and it had the capability of crossing more tho...
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...keleton of it and it had the capability of crossing more thousands of kilometres...
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...ast these all points by some evidences.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233236151603 0.261695866417 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.174927113703 0.158904122519 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0583090379009 0.0723426182421 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495626822157 0.0435111971325 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0524781341108 0.0277247811725 189% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148688046647 0.128828473217 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0495626822157 0.0370669169778 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.21242450685 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320699708455 0.0208969081088 153% => OK
Particles: 0.00291545189504 0.00154638098197 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.0903790087464 0.128158765124 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0262390670554 0.0158828679856 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116618075802 0.0114777025283 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1835.0 1645.83664459 111% => OK
No of words: 318.0 271.125827815 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77044025157 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317610062893 0.374372842146 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213836477987 0.287516216867 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119496855346 0.187439937562 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0566037735849 0.113142543107 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21242450685 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.8630313142 53.8517498576 102% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 31.8 21.7502111507 146% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6249958124 49.3711431718 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.5 132.220823453 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 21.7502111507 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.878197800319 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.39072847682 324% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.1836477987 50.5018328374 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.55789473684 1.90840788429 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53995001365 0.549887131256 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.157103138687 0.142949733639 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688486778596 0.0787303798458 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.700648399928 0.631733273073 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217980407413 0.139662658121 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269718134711 0.266732575781 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100441661724 0.103435571967 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311875379163 0.414875509568 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0582148392343 0.0530846634433 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370961326862 0.40443939384 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367596841395 0.0528353158467 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.