The reading and the listening both are about odd sounds, also called quackers, which are heard by the Russian sailor for almost two decades. The author provides three theories to justify the source of these weird sounds. The lecturer challenges the statement made by the writer. He is of opinion that none of these theories are convincing.
First of all, the article claims that sounds were caused by orca whales, because female orca uses the sounds to attract male orca whale during courtship period. However, the speaker casts the doubt by saying that orca whales usually live on the surface of the water, whiles noises were received under submarine, therefore it is not a pleasing theory.
Secondly, the lecturer contradicts the second statement by asserting that giant squids are not the true source either, because voices are noticed only for two decades and after that they completely disappeared. So, this point is not agreed with article statement that giant squids were the sources of strange noises, because giant squids continue to live in the ocean before and after the perception of sounds, there is no evidence of their extinction.
In the last, it is stated that sounds might be produced by other military crew from another country and might be difficult to detect by sonar. On the other side, the lecturer rejects this theory, because voices are moving constantly and it was not easy for crew to move fast with directions. Moreover, since now, there is not invention of any silent engine which they could use to go around. Hence, it is not assured theory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stify the source of these weird sounds. The lecturer challenges the statement made ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32730782119 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6260395789 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306476377849 0.272083759551 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085054213719 0.0996497079465 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671036920939 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155250502603 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451919806594 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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