TPO 33: Carved stone balls

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TPO 33: Carved stone balls

In this set of materials, the article and the lecturer are both talking about the use of carved stone ball. However, the lecturer disagrees with the article. She thinks that the theorems mentioned in the article are not correct, offering several reasons to oppose the article.

First, the reason is associated with the sign of use on the stone balls. Although the article claims that the stones ball were used as a weapon, the lecturer argues that the weapons are always with the signs of use such as cracks or damage on it and it is not seen on the stone balls. Therefore, the article's statement is not convincing.

Second, the lecturer refutes the article by mentioning the density. While the article points that stone balls were used as a standard for a system of weights and measures, the lecturer states that the stones balls have different mass because of different density. The stone balls may have the same size, but they were made by different types of stones which have different density, so the stone balls have different weight. Thus, the stone balls were not useful to weight of measure.

Third, the article states that the stones balls were used to mark the social status of their owners. However, the lecturer says that some carvings on the stones are intricate but some are simple. She also mention that Britain who had a high ranking were often buried with their possessions, but the stone balls were not find in any grave. Thus, the stone balls were not use to serve as social purpose.

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were not used to serve as social purpose.

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