Tpo40
Both the reading and the lecture discuss about maintaining human presence on venus. While the author claims that it is impossible to think about staying on venus and it is inhospitable, the speaker disagrees and provides some pieces of evidence to state that it can be possible to have station on venus.
First, the passage says that atmospheric pressure on the surface of venus is 90 times greater than earth and all spacecrafts have landed there were crushed. However, the lecturer thinks in a different way. According to the lecture, they can stablish station floating such as a balloon. It can floats 50 kilometers high above them and there will be the same pressure that we have on the earth.
Additionally, the text points out that there is no water and oxygen on the venus and suppling them from the earth is impractical. Conversely, the man disapproves this point. He points out that they can do chemical processes to achieve that compound material which is necessary to have and take it to the venus surface.
Furthermore, the article states that there are poor sunlight in compare to the earth. The most Sun waves reflect by thick clouds. Therefore, it can cause lack of using solar power cells. In fact human could not get electricity for their machines and other power equipments. On the other hand, speaker rejects this idea by telling that clouds are not thick. Moreover, they can use reflecting sunlights to have solar power in the above clouds to produce electricity power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e crushed. However, the lecturer thinks in a different way. According to the lecture, they can sta...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'float'
Suggestion: float
...tion floating such as a balloon. It can floats 50 kilometers high above them and there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89411764706 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56647417604 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6716187849 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356456603992 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100054429436 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610622519172 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192355915263 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131350858944 0.0443174109184 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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