In the set of the materials, the article states that the Venus condition is not compatible with a permanent exist of human on it and provides some reasons to support. However, the professor, in the lecture, explains that although maintaining of human on the Venus is not without challenge, It is completely possible and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the pressure of the Venus' surface is extremely high and it can crush the people who land on this planet. Nonetheless, the professor argues that human can produce balloon station and live above the Venus' ground. In addition, he says that in the 15 kilometers above the surface, Venus has same pressure of the earth. Therefore, everyone can easily live in that balloon station.
Second, the reading passage says that because there are no water and oxygen in the Venus, human have to transfer them from the earth and this regular transportation is impractical. The professor counters this point by stating that the Venus' atmosphere contains carbon dioxide and some other chemical material, these chemicals allow the human to produce water and oxygen in the Venus. Thus, importing water and oxygen from earth to Venus is unnecessary.
Third, the reading makes the argumentation that due to the thick cloud in the Venus atmosphere, the most of sunlight radiation reflected and people can't provide enough electricity for their apparatus through solar power cells. The professor refutes this claim by pointing out that if the human locates their station above this thick cloud, they will get more sunlight even than the earth surface because the solar cells can use both direct sunlight and its reflection from thick clouds. Hence, a human can provide their electricity very easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n easily live in that balloon station. Second, the reading passage says that be...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sunlight radiation reflected and people cant provide enough electricity for their ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5341332154 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0395179017 49.2860985944 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396928479812 0.272083759551 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148329433967 0.0996497079465 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599611104452 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228122331079 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605097561199 0.0443174109184 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.