The article states that it would not be possible to maintain a permanent presence on Venus and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that it might be possible to maintain presence on Venus and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article claims that atmospheric pressure on Venus is much higher than on Earth. The professor refutes the point by saying that 50 kilometers above of the surface of Venus is possible to stay their. He states that the atmospheric pressure above 50 kilometers of Venus is same as pressure on Earth. So it is possible to stay on Venus atmosphere by using gas bloom.
Second, the reading states that there are no reservations of water on Venus surface and it is not feasible to provide daily supply of water from Earth to Venus. However the professor says that there is further solution for water. According to the professor there is presence of carbon dioxide and sulphuric acid. The chemical reaction between them generates water and other gases, this water is useful for drinking.
Third, the article says that very little sunlight reaches to the surface of Venus and due to this the solar panel cannot be generate more electricity from little sunlight. The professor opposes this point by explaining that there is feasible to generate electricity on Venus. The professor further support this statement by saying that above 50 kilometers of Venus surface there is less dark clouds, so there is source to get more sunlight from less dark clouds and by putting solar panel we can generate more electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly supply of water from Earth to Venus. However the professor says that there is furthe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.261695866417 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.143859649123 0.158904122519 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108771929825 0.0723426182421 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0315789473684 0.0435111971325 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280701754386 0.0277247811725 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161403508772 0.128828473217 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0210526315789 0.0370669169778 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50556944595 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385964912281 0.0208969081088 185% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0842105263158 0.128158765124 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140350877193 0.0158828679856 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1583.0 1645.83664459 96% => OK
No of words: 265.0 271.125827815 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97358490566 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377358490566 0.374372842146 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283018867925 0.287516216867 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188679245283 0.187439937562 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0905660377358 0.113142543107 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50556944595 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441509433962 0.539623497131 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.8073544959 53.8517498576 76% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3846153846 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3637597219 49.3711431718 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 132.220823453 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.878197800319 44% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 48.6865021771 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.18965517241 1.90840788429 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.682505255878 0.549887131256 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181188155383 0.142949733639 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114801968439 0.0787303798458 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664638996711 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124472436484 0.139662658121 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.337795743882 0.266732575781 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103130214725 0.103435571967 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368931496792 0.414875509568 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0126640380648 0.0530846634433 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.496977772379 0.40443939384 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171274756594 0.0528353158467 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.