Today, most buildings are made of the glass. Glass is a great material to design buildings but it is harmful to birds. Birds are not able to distinguish between glasses and open air and as a result, they could be injured. The reading suggests some solutions. In the lecture, however, the professor finds them inefficient.
First, the reading explains that architectures can use one-way glass instead of normal glass. Through these glasses, people in the building can see out but birds can not see in. Nevertheless, the professor clarifies that they are like a mirror so they reflect sky and tree and tempt birds to fly through them.
Moreover, the reading talks about colorful designs. For instance, windows can be designed with strips or another shape of color and it is like an alarm for birds to distinguish between windows and open air. The professor contends that it is not a good idea because birds can see the hall and fly through it.
Finally, contrary to the statement in the reading that creation a magnetic field would be helpful, the professor states that although birds are able to sense magnetic fields but they use this ability just for long distances. For example, in the winter when birds fly to warmer places they use this ability but they are disabled to use it in short distances like flying from one city to another one.
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...some solutions. In the lecture, however, the professor finds them inefficient. ...
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... but birds can not see in. Nevertheless, the professor clarifies that they are li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78205128205 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44507567607 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542735042735 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1020007646 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54149454808 0.272083759551 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174126558726 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982470952877 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318448187015 0.162205337803 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363897577073 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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