In view of the reading, the author enumerates that so limited are the fossile information of Agnostids, that there are solely some guesses about how this extincted marine behaved and devoured food, by pointing out 3 reasons of support. Finding the statements arguable, the lecturer casts doubt on the claims made by the article and presents a piece of evidence in contrary. In following paragraph, we try to clarify this ambiguous matter.
At first, the author argues in has been noted that the arthropods were very strong swimmer and it can be possible that the Agnostides as kind of arthropods have this feature too. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the swimmer arthropods had large well-developed eyes. On the other hand, the Agnostids had tiny poorly eyes and sometimes they were blind. Due to having this kind of eyes, if they had kind of sensitive sensor, it may possible to confirm their free-swimming predatory, but because there is no evidence of that, It is totally impossible.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view Agnostides may be a kind of seafloor dwellers and ate the bacteria of dead organisms. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this idea by clarifying the fact that the dwellers move usually slowly and they found in small geographic area because of this feature. With this in mind, it is impossible to consider Agnostides as the dwellers since they moved fast and found in different area with large distance.
Finally, the author asserts parasite sort of living as the last point for supporting the way that Agnostides found food. The lecturer, though, dismisses ir by saying that the population of the parasites always is low but the Agnostides had large population and owing to this fact, we could not consider the parasite living as the way they lived.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'move'.
Suggestion: usually move
...y clarifying the fact that the dwellers move usually slowly and they found in small geograph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, if, may, so, well, in addition, kind of, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96721311475 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64767852254 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4076842505 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370738536078 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125825591625 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817974454586 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196126108389 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083051854762 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.