The question is that did bees exist on Earth as early as about 200 million years age? There is some fosilized structure that sombody say taht these structure relates to bees. And others disagrees with this idea. There are several reasons which the passage shows that bees were not exist in the early past. But the lecturer disagrees with the passage. In the folllowing paragraphs, their reasons is illustrated.
First, the passage states that there is no fossils which be related to bees. Thus, there was no bee in the erarly time. If bees were exist, now it must remain some fossils of their bodies or their nestd. But the lecturer says that in is not nessesary to be some fossils if they are exist. And she adds that because of Rezins which trees release, their fossils may be losts. Thus, this statement can not be a good reason to deny the existance of bees.
Second, the passagee states that in that times, there was an absence of floering plant, and now we know that bees almost feed on flowers. Because of the lackl of flowering plant< there was no bee in early ages. But the lecturer states that in that time there was other plants like Pantris which bees used to feed on them. So this reason cannot be a good reason.
Finally, the passaage states that the fossils which was found in Arizona, there was some difference in the shapes of of their nest relative to the present nests. Modern patterns have a spireal shape. So these fossils were made by other insects such as wood-boring beetles. But the lecturer disagrees with this reason. She added that some resons like water proofing may be the reasons that those fossils are different from modern nest, so they may related to the bees nest. Thus, like the other bad resons, this reason cannot be good reason and she refute this passage claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...ch the passage shows that bees were not exist in the early past. But the lecturer dis...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no fossils'?
Suggestion: there are no fossils
...ated. First, the passage states that there is no fossils which be related to bees. Thus, there w...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...no bee in the erarly time. If bees were exist, now it must remain some fossils of the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...essesary to be some fossils if they are exist. And she adds that because of Rezins wh...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... know that bees almost feed on flowers. Because of the lackl of flowering plant ^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...there was some difference in the shapes of of their nest relative to the present nest...
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Line 7, column 549, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'refutes'.
Suggestion: refutes
...is reason cannot be good reason and she refute this passage claim.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63043478261 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10446524491 2.5805825403 82% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465838509317 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0427424962 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7727272727 110.228320801 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06452816374 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124180431736 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442544281302 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239304621584 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861699640202 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00959605550191 0.0443174109184 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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