TPO 49
In this set of materials the reading passage discusses that the humpback whales find their magration direction by stars and explain some reasons to support this claim. While, in the listening the professor casts doubts on what is presented in the text and believes that this idea nis at the first is fasinating but it is not convencing.
First of all, in the text it is clearly mentioned that humpback whales known as an intelligent animal so they can use stars for navigate during maigration. However, the professor claims that threre are some other animals that used stars for navigahtion. Thus, seen three is not association between cornitive ability and navigation using stars. For example, some birds navigate by stars but they are not very intelligent animals.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that just an external force can maintain humpback whales migrate in straight lines. He says that a magetic field in the brain of humpback whales is the reason that they can navigate and preserve their especial line. The magnetic field in the brain of humpback whales is sensitive to Earth magnitic field and they find their direction using this ability.
Finally, in the text it is stated that the spy-hopping behavior in the humpback whales shows that they do this behavior to watch the stars position. The professor subscribes that other animals like shoks have this spy-hopping behavior and they use from this behavior for find a prey and hunting and maybe the spy-hopping behavior in whales have the same function.
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- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them take a part time job 76
- TPO 17 – task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better than they are. 70
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- TPO 44 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...his set of materials the reading passage discusses that the humpback whales find...
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...ing passage discusses that the humpback whales find their magration direction by...
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...m. While, in the listening the professor casts doubts on what is presented in the...
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...the text and believes that this idea nis at the first is fasinating but it is not...
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... an external force can maintain humpback whales migrate in straight lines. He say...
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...hales migrate in straight lines. He says that a magetic field in the brain of hum...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...a magetic field in the brain of humpback whales is the reason that they can navig...
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...line. The magnetic field in the brain of humpback whales is sensitive to Earth m...
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...magnetic field in the brain of humpback whales is sensitive to Earth magnitic fi...
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...the spy-hopping behavior in the humpback whales shows that they do this behavior ...
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... that other animals like shoks have this spy-hopping behavior and they use from ...
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...have this spy-hopping behavior and they use from this behavior for find a prey a...
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...or find a prey and hunting and maybe the spy-hopping behavior in whales have the...
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...the spy-hopping behavior in whales have the same function.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, may, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.046875 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52332865477 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4921875 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8788848484 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461980627046 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190122774659 0.0996497079465 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740796736246 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27407753592 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819395127795 0.0443174109184 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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