The reading claims that humpback whales use stars to navigate and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that this is a fascinating theory but the reasons are unconvincing and refute them all.
The reading passage bring the idea that humpback whales are intelligent enough to use stars to navigate by. On contrary, the speaker refutes this point by saying that there is no connection between intelligence and using stars to navigate. He states that bird and dogs use this method but not because they are intelligence, in fact fact they born with this ability.
Furthermore, the article argues that humpback whales migrate in straight line and it’s not possible unless using some external objects like stars while, the lecturer says that humpback whales use earth magnetic field as external hint to migrate. According to the professor in whale’s brain, there is biomagnetic which is sensitive to earth magnetic.
Finally, the reading asserts that humpback whales have spy-hopping behavior and they use to looking at the stars to providing them with information to navigate by. In contrast, the speaker dismiss this issue by saying that this behavior has nothing to do with navigation. He states that another animal like shark do spy-hopping but they don’t migrate, They use it to hunt. Also he mention that during day there are no stars in sky to use it to navigation and this reason is pure speculation.
- TPO 41 - integrated writing 76
- TPO-30 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use spec 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex 68
- Independent writing TPO 51 38
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: fact
...t not because they are intelligence, in fact fact they born with this ability. Further...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...on't migrate, They use it to hunt. Also he mention that during day there are no...
^^^^
Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...t migrate, They use it to hunt. Also he mention that during day there are no stars in s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, look, so, while, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 236.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66262231614 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.445373786 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376100360198 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154292634748 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102321750514 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236796428125 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442006242911 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.