tpo-50
In the reading, the author claims that the project of sending humans to Mars would not be practical pointing out 3 problems of support. However, finding all the problems questionable and implausible, the lecturer repudiates the claim and present some solutions for these problems so that the mission would be possible.
At first, the author argues that a round-trip to Mars takes 2 years and supplying food, oxygen and water for this long period of time is impossible. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that astronauts can use hydroponic. Hydroponics is a technique by which astronauts can cultivate their food in water instead of soil and it takes a little space. The hydroponic technique can be used for recycling the waste water and makes it drinkable water. Moreover, owing to the fact that plants absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, this technique helps astronauts to be provided by a considerable amount of oxygen.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that zero-gravity environment of space has negative consequences such as decrease in muscle mass or lowing bone density, especially if experiencing low gravity last for several months. That being said, the author disputes it by clarifying the fact that scientists have launched several spaceships so for and the astronauts have learned a plethora methods to deal with this problem. For instance, they can do regular exercises during the mission to help their body be in a favorable status. These exercises will increase the concentration of the vitamins in their bones, thus prevent happening the negative effects.
Finally, the author draws attention to exposing to hazardous levels of space radiation as the last problem which makes the Mars mission impossible. Yet again, the lecturer dismisses it by pointing out that these radiations are not dangerous all the time and astronauts special equipment to protect themselves in that time. Occasionally radiations would be hazardous for astronauts and during this time, they can use a small shielded area. Due to the small size of it, it does not add a substantial weigh to the spacecraft.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ng food, oxygen and water for this long period of time is impossible. Conversely, the lecturer...
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Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a substantial weigh to the spacecraft.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84391482667 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8980773889 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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