Based on given materials, the article as well as the lecture discusses possibility of establishing colonies of humans on the asteroids. The author states that cause three reasons, it would be a good plan rather than making colonies on the other planets. That being said, the lecturer provides several downsides to repudiate this claim.
Initially, the author says that low gravity is a reason to the extend that making the landing of spaceship safer than landing on the Moon or Mars. However, the lecturer explains that low gravity brings some side effects. More especially, it presents certain risks such as losing muscles and bone density becomes lower. To wrap it up, humans suffer problems more than getting benefits.
Second, the writer proclaims that most of the asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals. Yet again, the speaker underscores that by explanation of additional factors. In other words, mining and transportation costs reduce benefit. Beside of that, there is no guarantee that the metals have a constant prices since by entering new metals to market, the prices of metals would be reduce based on economic's theories.
The final point of contention between reading and listening passages is reaching asteroids. The author thinks the asteroids are easy to reach, thus they will be a good option to colonize. On the other hand, the speaker explains that it is not a good idea because couple of reasons. First, whatever, they are easy to reach, but there is not easy to get back from them. Furthermore, the asteroids have unusual orbit spaces to the extend that there are unable to forecast for colonization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...or says that low gravity is a reason to the extend that making the landing of spaceship sa...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ays that low gravity is a reason to the extend that making the landing of spaceship sa...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 425, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... asteroids have unusual orbit spaces to the extend that there are unable to forecast for c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...eroids have unusual orbit spaces to the extend that there are unable to forecast for c...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, second, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09594095941 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5867079712 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9030742807 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759446153004 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227742229452 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306626097205 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398549559559 0.162205337803 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345123585906 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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