TPO 9 task 1

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TPO 9 – task 1

The professor discusses the Hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines and explains why they are not a proper solution to the internal-combustion engines. According to the professor, governments and car manufacturers are too optimistic about these fuel cells. The information she presents contradicts the fact outlined in the reading passage.

First, the lecturer indicates that Hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines require pure hydrogen in liquid form, which is not easily available. Although hydrogen atom exists in many substances in the nature, pure hydrogen needs to be manufactured artificially; hence, its...

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