TPO40
The reading specifies that there are three reasons that venus condition are so extreme and inhospitable for mantaining human presence. However, The professor states that it is possible to maintain human presence and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, atmospheric pressure at surface of venus is 90 time higher than the eath's surfurce pressure. Nevertheles, scientists can establish a floating spacecraft like balloon above the surface and by this way atmospher pressure get equal to atmosphere pressure on earth and there is no danger for spacecraft to get crashed.
Second, based on the reading, there are no water reservoirs on venus' surface and the planets are made up mostly of carbon dioxide. In contrast, the professor contradict the idea reasoning that it is true there are not any oxygen or water vapor but there are compound of chemical material which we can use them to produce oxygen and water vapor on venus.
Third, according to the reading, sunlight that hits the venus is reflected by thick clouds that fill the atmosphere and human can not supply electricity power for their equipments . On the contrary, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that the cloud are not very thick and we can use solar power cells by constructing a station which using both the direct and block sun light and this helps to produce more power.
Therefore, the specific points mentioned in the reading do not make sense.
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- TPO 31 83
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'compounds'?
Suggestion: compounds
...any oxygen or water vapor but there are compound of chemical material which we can use t...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y electricity power for their equipments . On the contrary, the lecturer opposes t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, in contrast, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02109704641 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5763395736 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5130816277 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.222222222 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394399971021 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144457919974 0.0996497079465 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687918239328 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170826859918 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915068076313 0.0443174109184 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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