tpo44
The author discusses several possibilities that might casue the presence of silver coin as fake historical evidence of connection between norse and Native Americans a thousands years ago. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the reasons made in the article. she mentions that it is a genuine evidence.
The writer explains that there is a great distance between coin site ,called maine, and the main norse settlement in Canada. The professor challenges this reason by saying that a lot of other objects have been found in the maine area which are from distant places. Furthermore, maine people could travel to far areas and they might reach the norse settlement in the easthern Canad.
Second, the passage states that no other coins have been discovered there. The lecturer challenges the reason and says that coins were valuable possession for the norse and they resided in the maine area for a short period. Thus they packed up all the valuable things such as coins and the discovered one has remained there by accident.
Third, the author avers that European silver coins did not have any perfomance in the America regions and its presence is not reasonbile. In contrast, she refutes this possibility. she claims that the coins might have other application in that area such as ornaments or jewelry because of their unusual and attractive appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a thousand'
Suggestion: a thousand
...tion between norse and Native Americans a thousands years ago. However, the lecturer casts ...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ubt on the reasons made in the article. she mentions that it is a genuine evidence....
^^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re is a great distance between coin site ,called maine, and the main norse settlem...
^^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d in the maine area for a short period. Thus they packed up all the valuable things ...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...contrast, she refutes this possibility. she claims that the coins might have other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, second, so, third, thus, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53262749115 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4769255532 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447874463867 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147123819089 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097773544637 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253207895255 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322930947446 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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