TPO45 integrated
Both the passage and the lecture are about solution which can useful too protect frog population from declining. The article mentions each solution proposed, however the speaker opposes all of them one after another. she thinks that solutions offered by the author won't be practical.
First of all, the auther mentions pesticides, and it is stated in the passage that if they were used, it would prevent the frog population's decreasing. it is described that spreading of these pesicides to farm sorrounding, used to prevent insects damaging farm crops and yeids, can attack nervous system of frogs which is so haphazard for them. it has some disadvantages which pointed out by the lecturer. she says utilizing of this approach can harm farmers by damaging crops, therefore it isn't economical fair and practical.
Second of all, the second solution proposed in the reading contracted by the speaker. she expresses there is some problems by this solution because it's require capturing each frogs individually, and it needs play again and again, at times, it is so expensive and complicated. that's how the lecturer ignores the second way of the reading.
Finally, the passage mentions that it would be efficient if using and developing of the significant water habitats sre restricted. Although, the speaker points out it isn't safe because of global warming. it causes many of this habitats to be low water or even extinct, therefore she rejects the last solution discussed in the reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to protect'?
Suggestion: to protect
...ure are about solution which can useful too protect frog population from declining. The art...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... opposes all of them one after another. she thinks that solutions offered by the au...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...revent the frog populations decreasing. it is described that spreading of these pe...
^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...f frogs which is so haphazard for them. it has some disadvantages which pointed ou...
^^
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ages which pointed out by the lecturer. she says utilizing of this approach can har...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...farmers by damaging crops, therefore it isnt economical fair and practical. Second...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... the reading contracted by the speaker. she expresses there is some problems by thi...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some problems'?
Suggestion: there are some problems
...ontracted by the speaker. she expresses there is some problems by this solution because its require ca...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...es, it is so expensive and complicated. thats how the lecturer ignores the second way...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...es, it is so expensive and complicated. thats how the lecturer ignores the second way...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ed. Although, the speaker points out it isnt safe because of global warming. it caus...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...it isnt safe because of global warming. it causes many of this habitats to be low ...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...se of global warming. it causes many of this habitats to be low water or even extinc...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14403292181 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70741863528 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588477366255 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3018851141 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875068419005 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315350170584 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167011889989 0.0662205650399 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529140283232 0.162205337803 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164064476741 0.0443174109184 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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