TPO49-Humpback whales
The reading is about doubts which explain how the whales migrate a long distance just for feeding and mating, and it is mentioned in the passage that they might be able to navigate by stars. In contrast, the lecturer opposes each of the statements described in the reading. he states that navigating by stars is fascinating, at time, evidences are not convincing and valueable.
First of all, this claim, navigating by stars, cause whales to seem intelligent. The author says whale's brain is complicated and powerful, and that's why they have a stronge basis of this ability. However, the speaker believes that there are no connection between this ability and the genuine. he adds some other animals such as birds and ducks are able to navigate by stars not just humans, but the thing which pursuades speaker to disapprove this statement is that there is no sign to show ducks and birds intelligent, in spite of having this ability.
Moreover, the author points out one of whales behavior that they could move in a straight line, and maintain it. it is stated that some other animals do the same deed, but they move straightly with landmarks are in the land. So, it shows us that whales, which don't have these kind of landmarks, again utilize stars to migrate. The lecturer contracts this claim. he declares that one of the extra force which led these animals to maintain movement straight is earth's magnitide, and the whales can use this sign too. that's how the speaker ignores the second claim assereted by the author.
Finally, the speaker says other animals can spy-hoppying like sharks, but it isn't a sign of using the stars for navigating. Plus, whales do this behavior in the day which there aren't any stars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...he statements described in the reading. he states that navigating by stars is fasc...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... brain is complicated and powerful, and thats why they have a stronge basis of this a...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...n between this ability and the genuine. he adds some other animals such as birds a...
^^
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...des speaker to disapprove this statement is that there is no sign to show ducks a...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and. So, it shows us that whales, which dont have these kind of landmarks, again uti...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...t shows us that whales, which dont have these kind of landmarks, again utilize stars to mi...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ate. The lecturer contracts this claim. he declares that one of the extra force wh...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
..., and the whales can use this sign too. thats how the speaker ignores the second clai...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
..., and the whales can use this sign too. thats how the speaker ignores the second clai...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ls can spy-hoppying like sharks, but it isnt a sign of using the stars for navigatin...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...do this behavior in the day which there arent any stars.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, so, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81418918919 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44960156865 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7183712444 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37392923871 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115249187565 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761142954432 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226670653125 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190298104884 0.0443174109184 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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