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The reading text and lectuer are both about the verious benefites of the artificial reefs. While the author feels that man-made reef will facilitate the fisheries bussiness and also the fish itself. lectuer disputes all these claims and said that artificial reef in ocean may cause serious problems.

To begin with, the reading text suggests that, artificial reefs will increase the fish population because, it will facilitate the fish for the better feeding and reproductive spots. In contrast to that, lactures states that, main function of the coral reef is to attract the fish. In addition to that, if we are making too much artificial reef then it will increase the fish cont in one specific area and improve the income of the fishermen. But, in the end it will loss the major poppulation of the fish in the overall area.

Furthermore, the article posits that, establishment of the human made reef in sea is offer the economic copetetitive advantage for the small fishermen. In concer to that, perofessor goes to says that, unknown lication of the artificial reef is serious danger for all the fishermen because, it will cause a safety problem for the fisherman like, sometimes it will destroy the fishing nets of them and on top of that, manytime it will crashed the boat of the fisherman in shallow water.

In last, writer thinks that, making artificial reef is fascinated way to recycle an used material.additionally, it is an exnexpansive, eco-friendly way to reuse the used material. IN contrary, orator notes dowan that, occationally it cause harmfull impact on the environments. Like, ash born reef, which is made up of the used moterbike's tire. He notice that in some cases those ash born reef will spread out in the small fractions and releases the harmfull chemical in the sea water. As a result of that, majoor sea flora and slat water habitual plant will disturbed. SO, this claim proves that putting artificial reef in the oceanm, to get the high profit is not a eco-fraiendly way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lectuer
...ies bussiness and also the fish itself. lectuer disputes all these claims and said that...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'crash'
Suggestion: crash
...em and on top of that, manytime it will crashed the boat of the fisherman in shallow wa...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...icial reef is fascinated way to recycle an used material.additionally, it is an ex...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...rator notes dowan that, occationally it cause harmfull impact on the environments. Li...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'notices'.
Suggestion: notices
...made up of the used moterbikes tire. He notice that in some cases those ash born reef ...
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Line 7, column 559, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'disturb'
Suggestion: disturb
...lora and slat water habitual plant will disturbed. SO, this claim proves that putting ar...
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Line 7, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ual plant will disturbed. SO, this claim proves that putting artificial reef in t...
^^
Line 7, column 667, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e oceanm, to get the high profit is not a eco-fraiendly way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in some cases, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92625368732 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77948746995 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8051199618 49.2860985944 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06452816374 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290843499494 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107285143479 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552491184383 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191248656204 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023107540279 0.0443174109184 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in some cases, to begin with, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments