In the united states, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours, however many employees want to work a four day week
Typically, the US employee spends five days a week working 8 hours per day.
The reading suggests that having an employee to work for 4 days is beneficial to individual company, economy overall, and individuals themselves . While the lecture strongly refutes this for the following reasons
First, the reading mentions that companies can hire more people without adding to the payroll cost and also will have more profit because their employees are more rested and alert so less overworked and error prone. The lecture however challenges this by mentioning that the medical benefits and training has the same cost to the employee who works 4 days or 5 days a week. Also hiring more employee to have the same outcome requires more offices and computers. This collectively will add more costs and cut to the companies’ profits. The benefit to companies is therefore not well founded.
Second, the reading claims that it will decrease the unemployment rates by creating more jobs for every 4 employees with 80% payroll there will be one employee to be hired. So that will benefit the country economy. the lecture challenges this by mentioning that the companies will use other options to avoid the costs of hiring new employees due to the reason mentioned before. For example, The companies will raise the example they will raise the expectations and require the four days employees to be as productive as they used to be when they were working five days a week. They will also let their employees work overtime to make up for the difference in their outcome.
Finally, the reading thinks that it will give employees more free time to improve the quality of their lives by spending more time with their families and pursue private interests. meanwhile the lecture thinks the opposite. That it will reduce their quality of lives. For instance, working less hours will decrease their job abilities and decrease the chance of advancing in their careers because they will be passed on in promotions because companies will hire more consistent five days employees because they need someone to be supervising all week.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...there will be one employee to be hired. So that will benefit the country economy. the l...
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... families and pursue private interests. meanwhile the lecture thinks the opposite. That i...
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...quality of lives. For instance, working less hours will decrease their job abilities and d...
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...quality of lives. For instance, working less hours will decrease their job abilities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 352.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01420454545 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5312308273 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2271153401 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3125 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29724243699 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119306178788 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13940945614 0.0662205650399 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239539230806 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128249873066 0.0443174109184 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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