venous settlement for human
The reading and the lecturer are both about the settlement of human on the venous. The author thinks that presence of human on venous is impossible and inhospitable. The lecturer effectively casts doubt on the claims made in article. He believes that it could be possible even it has more challenges.
Firstly, the author claims that atmospheric pressure in venous is too high compared to earth. So, many space craft had crushed within an hour of landing. The lecturer challenges this point and says that above the fifty kilometers from venous atmospheric pressure is similar as earth. If station of landing will be fifty kilometers far from venous, then it can solve the problem, because human can survive in high atmospheric pressure.
Secondly, the author states that there is no water vapor and oxygen is available over there which is necessary for human life.Carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid are present over there, so oxygen and waterare required to import from the earth. The lecturer refutes this point by asserting that there is a chemical process which can make oxygen and water from complex of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. So, it is not necessary to import them.
Finally, the author mentions that only 40 percent of sunlight can reach on the venous surface because of dense layer of carbon dioxide layer below the clouds and they reflect back the light into space, so power cell cannot generate electricity. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that power cell can get energy through clouds which reflect the light back into the space. Power cells can get energy by that and by earth. It will be helpful for produce the electricity in venous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... venous is impossible and inhospitable. The lecturer effectively casts doubt on the...
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... possible even it has more challenges. Firstly, the author claims that atmosphe...
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...there which is necessary for human life.Carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid are present o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94306049822 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40520957873 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.0096994297 49.2860985944 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246744623022 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882560098019 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116850932126 0.0662205650399 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144681173245 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866064274697 0.0443174109184 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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