What is very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?choose on skill and use specific reasons and example to support your choice.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 804, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...nd large pore volume and pore diameter. also, drs analysis showed that the MgAl2O4 9...
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Line 1, column 856, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mag' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'mags'.
Suggestion: mags
...alysis showed that the MgAl2O4 90-AC 10 mag, have a narrower band gap compared with...
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Line 1, column 914, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pl
...er band gap compared with bare MgAl2O4. pl analysis also showed that the recombina...
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Line 1, column 1017, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mag' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'mags'.
Suggestion: mags
...tron-hole pairs in the MgAl2O4 90-AC 10 mag has decreased dramatically due to the p...
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Line 1, column 1089, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Synthesized
...ue to the presence of activated carbon. synthesized samples were evaluated for the solar-li...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...the removal of a range of organic dyes. finally, the effect of pH as one of the importa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... and reaction kinetic was investigated. finally, the reaction mechanism for mb degradat...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mag' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'mags'.
Suggestion: mags
... for mb degradation by mgal2o4 90-AC 10 mag was proposed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31679389313 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22795400853 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56106870229 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4844378627 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0143970184724 0.272083759551 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00606747829323 0.0996497079465 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0106379571581 0.0662205650399 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0143970184724 0.162205337803 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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