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<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The lecture mainly contradicts the information given in the reading passage stating that the zoos are the essential one to the modern culture and provides adequate education, whereas the lecture says that the zoos are only good for entertainment rather than the education. There are various points
discussed in the lecture to cast the doubts in the reading passage.
Firstly the speaker tells about the animal safety. The speaker says that the death of red panther arises a question about the safety, whereas the author has mentioned in the passage that the animals are treated well. The lecture says about the treatment is not pretty and as a result the panthers die and this has raised a question about the treatment mentioned in the reading passage, also this questions the responsibility of the caretaker in the zoos.
Secondly, lecture says that the zoos gives the good entertainment rather than the education. The author has mentioned in the passage that the zoos provide education, but the speaker says that the visitors in the zoos are entertained by the artificial facts and the misleading exibits.
Thirdly, the lecture says that the endangered species is problematic.Although the author given an example to state that the endangered species plays a vital function, the speaker tells that the zoos
have no distinct advantage by saving endangered species.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Discussed
...cation. There are various points discussed in the lecture to cast the doubts in th...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...nther arises a question about the safety, whereas the author has mentioned in the...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...nt mentioned in the reading passage, also this questions the responsibility ...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...age that the zoos provide education, but the speaker says that the visi...
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Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...p;the endangered species is problematic.Although the author given an example to state th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...ndangered species plays a vital function, the speaker tells that the zoos ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5512195122 5.08290768461 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.57510528188 2.5805825403 177% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 21.2450331126 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9912786275 49.2860985944 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 335.75 110.228320801 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 21.698381199 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06452816374 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132618525387 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124723220421 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888858809875 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909906157054 0.162205337803 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10153867256 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.3589403974 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 53.8541721854 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.0289183223 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.6 12.2367328918 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.42419426049 127% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.498013245 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.