without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital Punishment is essential to control violence in society.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In an attempt to reduce the level of crimes, the court decides to establish capital punishment among criminals in order to create safety life. However, this policy contributes contrary ideas that remind something as will now be argued bellow.
Within the instituted death penalty, it would not help to restrain lawbreaking. However it would possible to secure intensively from providence law-awareness installation among lawbreakers, including, training forgiveness that is learned from expert motivator practically. Then they would regard a bright side of life. Law conscious could be awoke among ...
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Sentence: However it would possible to secure intensively from providence law-awareness installation among lawbreakers, including, training forgiveness that is learned from expert motivator practically.
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