Water Use
The line graph shows that the usage of water by three different categories measured in km3 around the world over the period between 1900 to 2000 and the table represents the data of consumption of water in Brazil and Condo in 2000. The general overview here is that the consumption of water increased worldwide in agriculture, industrial use and domestic use.
To specify, a line graph shows that, there was a drastic increment in agriculture from 1900 to 2000 with 500 km3 to above 3000 km3, while a normal growth takes place in industrial use from nearly 0 km3 to 1200 km3 and a minor rise in domestic use from 0 km3 to 300 km3 in the same period.
In addition, table represents the consumption of water per person was 359m3 in Brazil having the irrigated land of 26,500 km2 with 176 million population.On the other hand, water consumption per person was only 8m3 with 100 km2 irrigated land having a total of 5.6 million people around the Congo.
In conclusion, the consumption of water worldwide increased in all the three sectors which are mentioned above in a period from 1900 to 2000.
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The general overview here is that the consumption of water increased worldwide in agriculture, industrial use and domestic use.
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In conclusion, the consumption of water worldwide increased in all the three sectors which are mentioned above in a period from 1900 to 2000.
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