average time and tasks which are performed by men and women at home.
The graph and table explain about average time and tasks which are performed by men and women at home.
The graph is noted that, in childless families, women spend 30 hours to do unpaid work at home. But, the men only spend around 18 hours weekly. The average time, which is spent by men in the family without children, is the same as men in family with 1-2 children and men who have more than 3 children. However, in the families who have 1-2 children, women spend approximately 51 hours each week. And the average time is increases dramatically into around 55 hours in the family with more than 3 children.
The table is noted that men mostly like to repair household, but women prefer to care their children. These unpaid works are performed by 30% men and 35% women. However, women dislike to do household repairs and men dislike to do childcare.
This ends my report.
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Sentence: And the average time is increases dramatically into around 55 hours in the family with more than 3 children.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and increases
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 9
No. of Words: 153 200
No. of Characters: 676 900
No. of Different Words: 73 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.418 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.219 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.018 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.632 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4