Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and art lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children’s families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that the government must fund music, dance and art classes for children. Others consider it is responsibility of children’s parents and charity organisations. I, personally, support the first opinion, and in this essay I will explain the reason why.
Needless to say that neither art nor dance classes are compulsory. People can exist without them, like without numerous other things. But what would the quality of our life be without them? These things enlighten us from inside, bring new colors into our life, enrich it with bright emotions. It is true that these lesson...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-08 | Grammerly Premium | 84 | view |
| 2015-07-27 | RBH | 85 | view |
| 2015-02-17 | nguyenkhaccuong | 73 | view |
| 2015-02-06 | dmelen | 94 | view |
- Museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not the local people. Why is it so? What could be done to encourage more local visitors? Please include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. 85
- In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society? 80
- Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international lang 70
- In many countries more and more young people are leaving schools but unable to find jobs What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngster 82
- Some people get into debts by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? 83
flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 3.498 7.5
"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentences varieties wanted.
No. of Words: 288 350
You may put more content if you want to reach 8.0 or over. Read a real story by a testbig user why more content:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-people-prefer-spend-their-live…
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1409 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.664 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.158 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.498 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5