Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that encouraging children to compete each other is so important, whether or not letting them experience being a member of team is a point of contention. There are lots of beliefs and reasons which could be discussed through this argument.
on one side, there are some reasons that support teaching cooperation to children. As a first and most important reason, if children learn how to communicate and operate as a member of a team it will be resulted into the more efficiency in teamwork at a work place. Especially they will be more successful in their private life. It is ...
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As a first and most important reason,
As the first and most important reason,
encouraging children to be competitive have some cons and pros.
encouraging children to be competitive has some cons and pros.
By giving them enough courage to consider group goals as an individual goal make children try harder
By giving them enough courage to consider group goals as an individual goal, it makes children try harder
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