A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say- Describe the work you wanted him to do.- What is your complaint about his job?- What do you expect him to do about it?

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A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?

Dear Jone,

Hope this finds you well.

I would like to thank you for all efforts you have done to re-construct our old family house. even though, I have some major points I would like you to take it into your consideration as not all the works have done perfectly and finishings contain a lot of defects.

Firstly, I would like to draw your attention that we agreed that we like to paint each room with different color to have modern-style and reflect warm emotions to everyone. but, unfortunately, all rooms have the same color which is the white color. Moreover, the used paint is not brande...

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the kitchen equipments did not installed fully
the kitchen equipments are not installed fully

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