Some people say that competitions are necessary to get success while others think that there should be cooperation among children . Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are tussling from dawn to dusk to win the race of life. Presently, some proportions of people assert that children should be encouraged to win various competitions and lead a successful life. By contrast, others think that they should be familiar with the value of cooperation to have a prosperous life. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own preception.
Numerous points can be put down to shore up the former view. First and foremost, participation in different sort of competitions boost up the talents and self confidence among the participants. As a result , they b...
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Sentence: What is more, it is said that 'unity is strenght' , cooperation brings unity in diversity .
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