In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for government and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Technological advancement, especially in developed countries, has led to some significant growth in health sectors. As this is the case, the average life expectancy is heightening which has also resulted in some problems like more pensioners and health care expenses. It seems to be interestingly clear that actions need to be taken in order to address this issue.
To begin with, as the number of aged people keeps increasing, the governments have an immense burden to pay pensions. As a result, governments are forced to collect more taxes from other age groups. Another worrying trend is, more ...
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