Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however agree that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, the number of criminal activities is increasing rapidly and to minimize this, different countries have placed several punishing methods. There has long been an argument that punishment should be fixed for certain crimes while some think it should be based on the intensity and circumstances of the offense.
To begin with, many people engage in various type of criminal activities. Some are extreme and some are not. Regardless of their intensity, punishment should be applied equally for each type of crime. This will discourage people to commit even a small crime by letting them...
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