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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals and makes them want to be or look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are convinced that the constant presence of advertisements somehow results our thinking clones, whiles others believe that each inhabitant has a different set of thoughts and is hardly manipulated by these advertisements. Personally, I do not believe that advertising is prone to make people become monotonous.
In the contemporary society where individualism is prominent, people would be hardly tolerant of sameness. This is mainly due to the fact that every single individual is endeavoring to be distinguished and unique, and they are not well receptive of the notion of being alike...
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