You have seen a Tourist Board advert welcoming nominations for a 'Best City/Town Award'. Nominate your home city/town.
Write a letter to Tourist Board. In your letter:
- Nominate your city/town and refer to its location
-explain what is special about your city/town
-say how winning an award would change your city/town
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in reference to the advertisement published by the Tourist Board requesting nominations for a ‘Best City/Town Award’. As a resident of Bangalore, I would be extremely delighted to nominate my city for this prestigious award. Bangalore is very well known throughout India as a ‘Green City’. It is located in the southern-most part of Karnataka state.
Bangalore is famous for its green and clean image. One can find big old trees on both sides of city roads. The municipal corporation here is very active and makes sure that Bangalore remains in the li...
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