For success in the future job, the ability relate well to people is more important than studying hard in the school.
Agree or disagree?
Humen have always been considering with variety of ideas in order to establish better future life and job issue is one of them that should be realized as soon as possible. Some people believe that for advancing in the future job, individuals should do any thing, which is related to their future job, their are others holding that opposes idea on this point. As far as from my perspective, engaging to relate work can be surely a wise decision for advancing in the future job. I would like to throw light on some factors about my viewpoint.
The first reason, which should be maintained here is that people learn knowledge and experiences based on their own requirment by engaging to relate abilities. As a matter of fact, they focus on their work better since they never become distractive by the irrelevant courses in school. They learn crucial and necessary points, which is more practical in the future. To illustrate an engineering student cannot be succeed by profound knowledge about history, while they become skillful by working in the relevant workshop. Additionally, they have enough time for expanding their skills and knowledge. Therefore, persons get rid of their stress for using from all ability for learning. Thus, people save time, and then they are able dedicate saved time on valuable items like making enjoyable free time. It promotes their motive for hard working.
Another factor, which deserves to be considered is that masses increase liklihood of getting decent job in the future thereby working in relevant setting. In that case, most of the companies are willing to hire experienced employees because they do not need to educate or over pay for correcting their faults during work. These experiences are originated from spending time beside specialists in the work atmospher not in irrelevant classroom. Furthermore, mankind has a golden opportunity to make part time job. It is argued that they earn a hoard of money for rooting out financial problems and concentrating on work better. Self-supported life makes a human powerful enough for learning complicated procedure during work because they have strong self-reliance.
To put everything in a nutshell, human should do relevant ability for success in the future occupation since they learn crucial skills, and they increase chance of success in the future.
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in order to establish better future life and job issue is one of them that should be realized as soon as possible.
in order to establish better future life, and job issue is one of them that should be realized as soon as possible.
Sentence: The first reason, which should be maintained here is that people learn knowledge and experiences based on their own requirment by engaging to relate abilities.
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Sentence: As a matter of fact, they focus on their work better since they never become distractive by the irrelevant courses in school.
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Sentence: Another factor, which deserves to be considered is that masses increase liklihood of getting decent job in the future thereby working in relevant setting.
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Sentence: These experiences are originated from spending time beside specialists in the work atmospher not in irrelevant classroom.
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