Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce. In which ways does age affect employment opportunities?
How might employees deal with the issues fairly?
In the highly competitive job market these days, sometimes it is very difficult for younger people to get a job. Some youth employments might be fortunate to get an offer for short-term jobs as older employees still want to keep their professions or employers prefer to hire mature employees instead. The ways that affect the employment opportunities and some measures for organizations to cope with this situation will be discussed carefully.
To begin with, the main factor is many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment or maintaining in their job fields....
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the main factor is many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment
the main factor is that many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment
the number of vacancies for the younger people will be left out from the job opportunities are over concerned about the experience of younger people that might less than more mature people even younger candidates have better and solid knowledge.
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