The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
The chart depicts seven different reasons for adults to study, while the second chart gives information about how the costs of each course should be divided.
Form the bar chart, it is evident that the main reason influencing adults to study is having interest in subject, at 40%. It is not far different from the previous reason, gaining qualifications comes in second place, at 38%. 22 % of the population think that their study is helpful for current job. The same percentage of people, at 20%, believe in the possibility of promotion and enjoy learning and studying. Just a few pople study as t...
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- the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca Cola 87
Sentence: Just a few pople study as to be able to change jobs and meet people.
Error: pople Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The costs of each course sould be shared among tax payers based on the opinion of 25 of people.
Error: sould Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 711 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.558 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.558 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.269 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4