Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in sponsoring arts than in athletics (like state Olympics team).
In every society there are some valuable areas like arts and athletics, which should get support from governments by financing and giving them subsidies. Areas like arts and sports contribute a big role to a society member’s welfare. While these supports for such areas is vital, some people believe it is better to invest money on supporting sporting activities and athletic teams. In contrast, some people believe this money should be absorbed by art activities and areas related to art. My opinion corresponds with people who believe governments should spend money in sponsoring arts.
Arts effect and role are indisputable in improving the culture of any society. Art activities like art galleries and exhibitions could be held in cities. These kind of activities fill the free hours of people in valuable way. People could bring their children to these activities, which children’s culture and knowledge about history and art, both are improved after visiting such places. In addition, theaters and cinemas are also considered in this area. If we eliminate these kind of places from any town, the quality of life plunge there. I remember when I was child there is a cinema in our city which our parents brought us to there every weekends. We watched a lot of movies and master pieces of cinema which contribute a big role in our culture. After a while, this cinema was closed because of some financial problems. We couldn’t imagine our weekends without going to cinema and watching movies. Fortunately, municipality of town bought that place, therefore the cinema could continue to work. This example of my own life illustrate how and why governments should support the artistic activities and places in cities.
The second reason of mine is athletics could get sponsors from non-governmental companies. We all know most of sport teams can get sponsors because of their ability to rich a lot of people from broadcasting their matches from media. These companies most of the time compete each other to be a sponsor of a sport team. Therefore, the money problem of sport teams is less than art activities. On other hand, art activities could not get sponsors like sport teams; therefore, this duty belongs to governments to sponsor art activities. To give an example, Nike is a big company which producing sport clothes, is the sponsor of most sport teams, even the more infamous ones like state teams. But you could imagine Nike is come and be sponsor of an art exhibition of a very famous artist. Not only Nike, it is same for most of companies.
In summary, in my opinion if governments have enough financial sources, they should support both arts and athletics equally. But in a condition, which governors should choose one area to put money there, it’s better to give it to art. Because arts is necessary for the culture of society; in other hand, while sport teams could get sponsors easily, it’s a big challenge for art activities to do that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...nd exhibitions could be held in cities. These kind of activities fill the free hours of pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...onsidered in this area. If we eliminate these kind of places from any town, the quality of...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...s artist. Not only Nike, it is same for most of companies. In summary, in my opinion if governm...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hallenge for art activities to do that.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in summary', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291666666667 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.148550724638 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0652173913043 0.0866891130778 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0289855072464 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0416666666667 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126811594203 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0307971014493 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61553987374 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.088768115942 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253623188406 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018115942029 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2970.0 2387.08602151 124% => OK
No of words: 499.0 408.028673835 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95190380762 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356713426854 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260521042084 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174348697395 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11623246493 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61553987374 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472945891784 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 54.5936078205 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8214285714 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.94636566 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8214285714 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.8735327798 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.04958677686 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200683438152 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125550353157 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791759236046 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.454295162612 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.098998362296 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743670597142 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695341232635 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311072438824 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0111771200992 0.067059652881 17% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151081254736 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539671517838 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 86 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 26 Out of 30