Some people believe that the government should provide free sport and fitness centers for everyone. What is your opinion about this?
In recent time, some people think that the administration should afford free sport and fitness centers for everyone. I strongly believe these are a good idea.
The establishment of free sport and fitness centers is good to the community because they can render people to do exercise together both with their families or friends. Moreover, these facilities can create healthier and happier community. For instance, in my hometown, there are fitness centers and facilities for free sport such as free-styling park for skateboard and bicycles, which is located near from my house. Once a week, I go to the sport center to swimming with my wife. When I go there, I see juvenile do some free sport like free-styling with their skateboard and bicycle. The young generations look so happy and healthy because this activity could burn their calorie.
Furthermore, doing exercise together with my family or friends can improve my knowledge and enrich my experience. I can share my experience with my friends and vice versa. Furthermore, doing some exercises in sport centers with my family can create a happy situation in my family. For instance, when I go swimming with my wife, I usually create a game with my wife. I usually throw a coin into the swimming pool and both of us should find it. This activity is very fun and makes us happier than before.
All in all, I agree with some people who believe that government should provide free sport and sport centers, because these facilities are important to create happy and healthy community.
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