Some people believe that university students should be rquired to attend classes . Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students . Which point of view do you agree with ? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer .
Should university students be required to attend classes ? There are two different opinions . Some people claim that attending classed is a must to students . Other people , however , argued that it should be for students to decide whether they want to go to class or not . As far as I am concerned , no matter whether students like it or not , they must attend classes .
Students who don't like to go to classes have their reasons . The main one is , they can learn knowledge by themselves . If they were asked to attend the class in which the professor teaches something they already have known, it would be a pain . Not attending class , students can control their time more freely and are likely not to waste time .
Although I agree that there may be one or two disadvantages to not attending class , I insists that the advantages of joining classes far overweigh them . In the first place , professors can teach students a lot of things that cannot be obtained from books . In Chinese dictionary , a university is defined to be a place where teachers forward what they know to students . In the book , normally there is just concentrated knowledge . How the writers gets and develops it is a question .How to answer this questions ? Go to the class The professor will not only teach you some knowledge , but also let you know how to use and develop it . As a Chinese slang says , ' Owning a key is owning a house.' That is the most important reason people want to study in university .
In the second place , you will be benefited from discussing with your classmates if attending classes . Different people have their own special capability . One people cannot be good at every aspects . What is the best way to share your knowledge with others and learn from others ? Go to class . Professor always gives some topics for students to discuss . In the discussions , you will be surprised that so many great fresh thoughts are pushing to you from your colleagues and they are free.
In conclusion , I believe that students should attend classes not only because professors can teach you the method of how to master and develop knowledge , but also because students can learn from each other in the class . In short , attend classes if you select to attend university .
- The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalisation produce positive effects for everyone . Do you agree or disagree ? 61
- Biotechnology companies all over the world are developing different types of genetically modified ( GM ) crops . However ,not enough is known about these crops on our health and the environment . Interfering with nature in this way should be prohibited . 73
- It is better for children if the whole families e g aunts uncles and grandparents are involved in the children s upbringing rather than their fathers and mothers only Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 77
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- Some people think that radio has become out of date and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news Do you agree or disagree 78
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198645598194 0.247107183377 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.196388261851 0.155533422707 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0519187358916 0.0946595960268 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564334085779 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0699774266366 0.0437548338989 160% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0948081264108 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.038374717833 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60455149311 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0496613995485 0.0326793684256 152% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0699774266366 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.038374717833 0.021408717616 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225733634312 0.011925033212 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2338.0 1933.35771543 121% => OK
No of words: 430.0 316.048096192 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43720930233 6.12580529183 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295348837209 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211627906977 0.28420135186 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139534883721 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.093023255814 0.137316102897 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60455149311 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409302325581 0.56093040696 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.1238287006 60.7387585426 73% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.672123832 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.52 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.814263465372 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 3.99599198397 1276% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.3627906977 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.02797202797 1.69124875643 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430086285408 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0888382631131 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0744252992396 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44871668259 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160866219908 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150832578139 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104174429897 0.0742795772207 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344474281132 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0521879310308 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290481871936 0.228012699653 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639041002209 0.058150111329 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.41683366733 410% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 14.0 1.9629258517 713% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 25.0 10.4468937876 239% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9