Biotechnology companies all over the world are developing different types of genetically modified ( GM ) crops . However ,not enough is known about these crops on our health and the environment . Interfering with nature in this way should be prohibited . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Genetically Modified ( GM ) crops can be produced in greater quantity , have more nutritional value and also do not need insecticides and pesticides . Despite these benefits , some people are against GM foods . However , I disagree with them .
Firstly , opponents of GM foods argue that GM crops are unnatural and that by creating them we are altering the natural world . This argument is not convincing at all . It is well known that all modern crops are the result of selective breeding done by agriculturists since age old times . Genetic modifications simply modifies crops in a more planned way and there is nothing unnatural is that .
Another argument raised by objectors to GM foods is that they could constitute a health risk ,for example by causing allergies or even by being toxic However , there is no evidence to support this idea . In fact , because GM foods can have improved nutritional value , they are more likely to be of benefit to the health of the population than a risk . The final objection raised by those who want GM foods banned is that GM crops which kill the pests which attack them may also kill harmless insects . They claim that this would be detrimental for the environment . On the contrary , since GM crops do not require spraying with toxic insecticides , environmental damage such as the contamination of soils and river s is avoided . In conclusion ,GM crops offer increased agricultural productivity and foods of higher nutritional value , both of which are essential if the growing world population of the twenty-first century is to be fed . I am unconvinced that GM crops pose a risk to our environment and health . Indeed , these crops have the potential to improve the health of millions throughout the world while causing less environmental damage than standard farming methods used today . I think it essential that , far from being prohibited , GM foods should be encouraged .
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253602305476 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.181556195965 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893371757925 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461095100865 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0374639769452 0.0437548338989 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129682997118 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0605187319885 0.0403226058552 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90152890478 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201729106628 0.0326793684256 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0893371757925 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172910662824 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115273775216 0.011925033212 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1951.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 345.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65507246377 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286956521739 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234782608696 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16231884058 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110144927536 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90152890478 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.56093040696 90% => OK
Word variations: 52.7547012161 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5625 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1708812463 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.9375 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 3.99599198397 951% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.0407608696 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.67391304348 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432586813313 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0770098552679 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.053253151424 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461219840234 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13818752945 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160900052749 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524861458695 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285128211494 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114593558073 0.0638462369009 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298350059195 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516727918354 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9