The chart gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002

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...2. According to the given information,it is clear that the most popular sport am...
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...st popular sport among girls was netball,with participation of 25 percent,whereas,a s...
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...netball,with participation of 25 percent,whereas,a similar percentage of boys prefer soc...
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...similar percentage of boys prefer soccer,which was their most favourite sport.However,...
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...er,which was their most favourite sport.However,the proportion of boys who enjoyed play...
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...h was their most favourite sport.However,the proportion of boys who enjoyed playing ...
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...oyed playing cricket was only 10 percent,while,hardly any girl took part in this sport...
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...hardly any girl took part in this sport.Furthermore,in case of swimming,the percentage of g...
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...girl took part in this sport.Furthermore,in case of swimming,the percentage of girl...
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...is sport.Furthermore,in case of swimming,the percentage of girls were higher as comp...
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...ing,the percentage of girls were higher as compared to boys,25 percent and 13 perc...
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...mpared to boys,25 percent and 13 percent,respecrively. The chart further reveals that fewe...
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...r girls participated in the martial arts,about 13 percent compared to approximately 11...
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...red to approximately 11 percent of boys.Next,in athletics,in comparison with their c...
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...to approximately 11 percent of boys.Next,in athletics,in comparison with their coun...
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...ely 11 percent of boys.Next,in athletics,in comparison with their counterpart,girls...
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...ics,in comparison with their counterpart,girls were slightly higher,6 percent and 4 pe...
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... slightly higher,6 percent and 4 percent,respectively.Apart from this,participation of both g...
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...er,6 percent and 4 percent,respectively.Apart from this,participation of both genders...
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...d 4 percent,respectively.Apart from this,participation of both genders in basketball and tenni...
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...ball and tennis showed a similar pattern,where 9 percent of boys preferred to both gam...
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... percent of boys preferred to both games,but,girls were little higher in tennis (8 p...
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...basketball (6 percent). In conclusion,it can be inferred from the chart that the...
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...both genders in sports were fairly equal,however,their sporting preferences tend to be d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'apart from', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273504273504 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.123931623932 0.116061578633 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0641025641026 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470085470085 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0213675213675 0.0131127313244 163% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136752136752 0.155750635184 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0379272487307 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 4.44284346165 2.65546596893 167% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025641025641 0.0210936926555 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0854700854701 0.0948980150116 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0042735042735 0.00437022459523 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213675213675 0.00967000014798 221% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1269.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 7.05 5.90752243213 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411111111111 0.337110787985 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.355555555556 0.247514529752 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244444444444 0.171178102325 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.112407865282 178% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.44284346165 2.65546596893 167% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.546246751206 112% => OK
Word variations: 57.3148152409 49.3433353143 116% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0094962315 196% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 167.842746343 42.9750493124 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.25 135.714022679 234% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 23.0094962315 196% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 0.689975730869 326% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.48048780488 1621% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 80.5555555556 47.7609492067 169% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 2.94281807926 79% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31494917699 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.29804676437 0.181151798455 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.09919354274 0.0850326197045 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.22044604925e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251780222327 0.228904883108 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979907812531 0.108899403657 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331917512286 0.367819155151 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878107715985 0.0812612215331 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251780222327 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979907812531 0.0921553760075 106% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK

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Rates: 78.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9